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soooo... i'm still awake and still bored...

decided to see what you guys think of this pic:

i know that it's a horrible scan, but it's the best i can do right now. this is just a sketch that i've been working on, little by little, for a while now. if i ever actually get the time, i'm going to ink it.

if you see any hideous anatomical errors (other than the fact that her head is too small and her hands are massive), let me know, so i can fix it.


Date: 2002-04-08 05:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] chewyourcactus.livejournal.com
Not that I'm critizing your work, but the fingers need some work. That and the thighs. Other than that, I think it's an awesome picture, it would look awesome in a comic. :o)

Date: 2002-04-08 06:39 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] andorus.livejournal.com
I was going to point out the hands (especially the right one, since the detail's not as clear on it), her right shoulder (it doesn't seem quite straight enough, but that might just be a "me" thing--I feel like it curves inward a bit too much), and her upper arms (too short--or her lower arms are too long; I'm not sure which it is). And her skirt-thing should curve a bit more around her torso too, I think. But I really like the overall of this, and your style...you should post more art. ;o)

Date: 2002-04-08 11:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] katriane.livejournal.com
you're right about the shoulder - thanks. i've been staring at it for so long that i didn't even notice!

Date: 2002-04-08 09:27 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cathryn.livejournal.com
I like it! The pose rocks! (sketch that with Col-Erase?). :) The legs/feet are great! I've kind of learned to draw boots, but I still have lots of trouble drawing good legs. Gotta give you props for the legs! :)

Date: 2002-04-08 11:09 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] katriane.livejournal.com
yeah, it's non-repro blue col-erase, so i really had to adjust the color to make it visible, which is why a lot of the detail has been lost.

thanks for the compliments!


Date: 2002-04-08 10:56 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cognizance.livejournal.com
The bod looks great to me. Although.. I don't have a good eye for that. But you know who does? [livejournal.com profile] f0rge does! He's great at anatomy.

One thing that I do notice in this drawing, however, is the clothing. The skirt doesn't seem realistic... well.. i guess it does, but it looks like it might be starched stiff or something. *smile*

Great job with the hair! It looks so soft! "^_^"

Date: 2002-04-08 11:07 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] katriane.livejournal.com
thanks for all the comments guys, i really appreciate it.

the fuzziness of the right hand (and the pic in general) can be attributed to my craptastical scanning job. the right hand is actually pretty detailed, but it's really really light, so you can't see the lines.

if i ever get the time, i'll be sure to correct those mistakes, ink it, and post it here.

Date: 2002-04-08 12:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tendertalons.livejournal.com
i love it!
when are you gonna write Chynna and collaborate with her?
do i get a thank*you in the liner notes??



Date: 2002-04-08 01:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] babybackribs.livejournal.com
that sketch is fantastic

Date: 2002-04-08 02:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dead-end.livejournal.com
from what i can make out, i really like the face. the lines are very strong
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